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23 July 2012 @ 06:19 am
The Solstice of the Young chapter 13 and epilogue  

Title : "The Solstice of the Young." Complete

Author : ariadnechan

Beta : The awesomestella_notecor without who i never get this done at all, you are my knight in shining armor! i love you my friend!

Series : TOS AU/crossover with Dune (it can be read as Aos too)

Pairing : K/S from pre-slash to established; Stonn/T’Grell, Stonn/T’Pring both mentioned

Characters : Admiral Archer, T’Pau, Sarek, Stonn, T’Pring, T’Grell (Original character), and several ocs.

Rating : Pg-13 to NC17

Length : 1900 aprox this part

Disclaimer: Sadly I don’t own Gene Rodennberry's Star Trek(Because Paramount win me over)or the novels of Frank Herbert,because obviously his son came first(from them I only took for play his Bene Gesserit plot).

Warnings: Slavery, Mind washing, Emotional Vulcans, so Spock OOC, Violence, Fight to the death, Pon Farr, if you didn’t read Dune, you only need to know these:

Summary: "In Terra, Archer wants to establish the Federation at any cost, even if it means sending Kirk into an uncertain mission as a slave in the Vulcan Empire, where Surak was banned. In Vulcan, Sarek sends Spock to the Young Tournament with a personal slave, he must start to understand his position in the Empire's most noble house.

What will happens when this two world crash together?"

Thanks: I want to thanks to my beautiful and wonderful and patience audience, because i finishing writing in some point of February but my faithful betas had a difficult year and find someone with the time to read all the fic and the beta the last chapter and the epilogue was hard... Thanks again stella_notecor.

Notes: The eyes of Jim shifting color because of the mélange they become deep blue when he just consume it in his shots and the pass to normal eyes in the case of Jim tos pale green, because of mélange never turn gold again; and in the case of Jim aos blue. Jim will never would quit ménlange, if someone is asking her/himself, if he wants to continue living, but as a bonus he will live longer than a normal human.

It takes me a lot of time but at last i figured out how to make Jim's eyes as if he was consuming mélange so you understand how he looks like ;) so this is my bonus for all the tardiness.

Master Link to the fic: http://ariadnechan.livejournal.com/147046.html

The Solstice of The Young.

Chapter Thirteen

'The Path Beyond You and I'.



Three days passed. Jim spent his time alternating between meditation and melds with T’Pau. The ‘Reldai’ taught him about the culture and tradition of his new house while she took some information from him. She assured him that when he settled into his new home she would start unlocking his memories.


His meditation sessions were progressing. He felt that Spock’s mind was becoming more and more stable and he could peak into his husband’s mind as he studied some ancient books and thought on him. Jim’s heart was enveloped in hope. By the fifth night he could enter the bond’s mindscape and find himself in the tree house.


The house was abandoned and filled with dust and gray. Jim decided to clean it and nurture the tree with water from his river. He planted some flowers and brought some light to the house. Then he summoned his bravery to go deep into the mountains from where Spock came. There Spock sat, alone with his tunic shattered and his face emotionless, looking at the sunrise, without looking at it. Jim took a seat at his side, but Spock didn’t notice his presence.


They sat in silence for a long time, until Jim decided to speak. “Hi, there!”


Spock nodded in his direction, acknowledging there was someone at his side. “I didn’t know there was anyone else in these mountains. Is this place yours?”


“No, Spock, this place is ours. Do you see the big tree out there?” Jim waved at the big tree.


“I didn’t notice it before.” Said Spock.


“That is our home, our bond that joined us together in the eyes of the gods, in the eyes of your people and in our hearts and minds. Do you remember me, Spock, Son of Sarek?”


Spock looked at him for a long time. “Take my hand and come with me Spock.”


Spock followed Jim like a sleepwalker. He really didn’t know why he was following him, but he did anyway. It seemed important somehow.


They entered the house. It seemed familiar to Spock. He felt warm and loved there, just as the person who brought him there, made him feel loved and warm. He was not alone or lonely anymore. Some flashes of memory came to his mind. He had felt that before. More flashes came to mind 'being with this person, talking with him, embracing him'. “Who are you? Where did you come from?”


Jim smiled at him. “I’m the one who will never be parted from you. I came from far away to meet you and I fell for you along the way. I’m the one who is waiting for you always. Please, remember me and comeback to my side because I was never away from you. Please forgive me and come back to me.”


As suddenly as the blond human had come, he disappeared into the thin air. The warmth and the love never left him; he felt his presence in the house. Wondering in it, Spock found a window with pots of flowers in it, and through it he could see an oasis; and Spock knew that the man came from there and that this blond had a secret name, one only he knew. And his name was Jim.




Jim came every day to Spock’s mind, smiling with his impossible blue eyes, talking to him about his world, Terra. Spock said little in response, because he prefer to be enveloped in the warm soothing feeling the blond, Jim, carried with him. The house resounded with life and light on it's own, every time they were together in it.  Spock marveled sometimes, that this being, this Jim was his…his T’hy’la. He had read about that word some where, but he did not remember, he did not care, all he wanted was to be with Jim.



Sometimes they went to the river, and explored the new configuration of the stars, who contained Vulcan and Terran constellations; sometimes brand new stars appeared and they passed the time naming them.


Sometimes they went to explore the mountains.  One day they decided go farther, to the other side of the mountains. The claiming was not to exhausting. At the top they could see only red, but they were determined to head downwards, and while going down the red began to turn into several colors- magenta, orange, brown, purple and blue, deep blue like Jim’s eyes.


There was no land on the other side of the mountains. It was a bottomless, there was nothing except colors and the fumes shapes they left behind when passing through them. The colors turned into a nebula and suddenly they were in deep space and they understood then, that this was their real home the one they could forge, one without form because they hadn't given it one yet. The bond they shared was infinite, and they could map it together.


The land from where they came from was in the past. And there were no need for apologies or sorrow, only the need to belong.


At their center, the colors mixed together into a chaotic turmoil and then they were transformed into a star so bright and burning, they were radiant and new as if them had born again.


Spock left his meditation room at the same time Jim left his chamber. When they found one another in the physical world, their meeting was the explosion of a star consuming and generating light, heat, and belonging tasting trough forever.

They seared their bodies, not in burning fire, but in flaming love. They explore each other, like they never had before, hands and mouth landing everywhere they could touch and kiss.

They could feel the consuming flames again in their lovemaking, but the burning came from the souls, not from a mating imperative. Spock put his fingers to Jim’s temple, and the intensity of their mindscape and their joining intensified. While touching they reached for their place far away from the mountains, and every touch was a new color, every smile and sound brought a new spark in tonality, a new star in their universe, a nebula, a shooting star. 

When Spock's alien cock entered Jim’s tender flesh everything exploded in light and a symphony of delight surrounded them. With every erratic move toward the end, a lightning bolt of electricity came through their bodies and charged the atmosphere. When they came together, a supernova of colors exploded in their universe with them as the center.


The End





The Solstice of The Young.




At last the party arrived at the ancient house of Solkar. Jim never saw something so grandiose before. It sat impressively on the citadel of Shikahr, a castle of alien architecture, really impressive and well-situated to defend  against an invading army. He could imagine warriors defending the citadel not too long ago and winning.  This was much bigger than the big house of the family who hosted them during the tournament. It felt as if a life time had passed from Jim since that tournament, and not only a couple of months.


Now the citadel was known for be the home of the High Council of Vulcan. The other great structure, of much modern architecture, which you could see in the distance.


They were received as a royal family. Which Jim suppose they were. None of these servants had seen Jim before, but rumors crossed long distances quickly as every eyes was on him as he entered. He dismissed them like a pro. Spock presented Jim to their aides, and they went to their new chambers as a married couple. They were a complete house in themselves, master bedroom, four other bedrooms with a spa, a library, a study, and a receiving chamber.

“I hope you find our accommodations adequate, my husband. There was not time enough to attend to details, but when you are ready you can ask for the books you want for your private study. We have only the house aides and servants, because we must to choose our own personal servants, so as you see there are much to attend.”


Jim was speechless. There will be more? But he tried to consider his new status. “I find this more than adequate, my love, we can work with these. We'll have plenty of time.” Jim closed the space between them and kissed his husband. 


It was hard to go to the sonic shower and change for engagement party for Spock's father. But they had a lot of years to be together, so really one night for the family was not so bad.


Jim didn't want an aide to help his husband get ready, but Spock scolded him through the link, so Jim supported him and keep his cool as Spock did the same for his husband.

The bride-to-be was named T’Ahru. She was serious and beautiful, but she had a hint of mischief. Jim can feel it in her; Sarek could feel it in her too, and he found this trait fascinating. Jim was happy for them, they make a good match.


The party was part official welcome for Spock and him and part announcing T'Aru and Sarek's engagement, after the dinner it became a drinking contest with the family who stayed. Jim only was in the mood for one shot, so he took his glass of Romulan ale with him when T'Pau called for them to her study.


Spock and Jim bowed before her. “Fa-ko-mekh Reldai”, “Mother Reldai.”


“Please sit my children. I hope your new accommodations to your satisfaction?” Both of them nodded. “Well then, we go directly to business because there is no time like the present, to begin our work.”


“First, Spock,  thou, shall be responsible for training Kirk in our traditions and etiquette from now on, as well as continuing his education in the Vulcanasu language. Kirk, thou, shall teach Spock to speak and write Terran, as well your cultural practices. This is of major importance, so every other responsibility Spock had, with the only exception of the High council, is now terminated until I say so.”


“Understood “Fa-ko-mekh Reldai”


"While Spock attends the High council with his father, Kirk and I shall have our sessions to unlock his mind. This is the only moment my tight schedule could afford. Is this understood, Kirk?”


“Understood “Mother Reldai.”

“I have spoken with your government Kirk. We shall have a meeting in six of your months, so we need to be ready, because both of you will be my aides in the negotiations. This a great honor for you, children, but I expect nothing more than the best from you. ”Skil na’etwel Maat heh pudor-tor na’T’Khasi .”

“We are here to serve, Mother Reldai.” The smiles on both of their faces were difficult to hide and T’Pau quirked her own lips upward,  then nodded her head and let them depart.



At last Jim and Spock settled  into their chambers for the night where they joined together body, mind and soul knowing  that the canvas of their destiny would be bright and new as the Equinox of "The To'oveh" was beginning. There was no longer Spock and nor Jim only a new shining Star.



The End



Words in Vulcan:


Fa-ko-mekh :  Grand Mother


Reldai  : (anc.) -- Female religious leader


To'oveh  : Adult.


Skil na’etwel Maat heh pudor-tor na’T’Khasi: “Victoria para nuestro Maat y Honor para Vulcano”


Na-T'Khasi  : Our- Home planet


Pudor- tor : To be honored


Maat :  Our clan (House)


Skil na’etwel :   Victoria

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Stella Notecorstella_notecor on July 24th, 2012 01:08 am (UTC)
I'm glad you finally got a chance to post this... and that money is starting to get better!


Also, this was such a fun story. I just had to say again how much I liked it. =)
ariadnechan: Kirk/Spock loveariadnechan on July 24th, 2012 01:32 am (UTC)
I'm so happy that you like it :)

Thank you so much!

How do think of my manip? Jim tos look younger? It take me days so i hope look a bit younger and now i hope it is most clear how his eyes look like ;)
Stella Notecorstella_notecor on July 24th, 2012 01:34 am (UTC)
TOS Jim does look younger, now that you mention it! I thought he looked different, but I figured it was just the eyes, lol.

And the eyes are very blue! I like the manip a lot. =)
(Anonymous) on February 17th, 2013 06:33 am (UTC)
young tos jim
if you want an easier starting point for a young tos jim, look up shatner in the Twilight Zone episode "Nick of Time" I think he was only like 29 when he played in that episode.
ariadnechan: facinatingariadnechan on February 18th, 2013 10:03 am (UTC)
Re: young tos jim
Oh thanks for the tip!

When i get to the second part i will look for that pics

Edited at 2013-02-18 10:03 am (UTC)